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Aly
01-18-2008, 10:51 AM
Ok...a year ago I wrote this poem and since everyone was sharing so much this week :p I thought I'd post it...I hope you enjoy it.


TICKING TIME

Rushing to the finish line,
Never keeping track of time,
As the days pass, so do the weeks,
Months and years, the clock ticks.

Never looking at today,
And always planning for one day
As if one day will always come,
So you say why bother with this one.

Never took a look around,
And paid attention to each sound
Never looked up at the sky,
And admired a bird fly
Never looked down at the ground,
And saw the creatures roam around
Never stopped to realize,
life is fading before your eyes

Just a minute in a day,
Is not too much to take away
Just to see what life is worth
On this place that we call Earth.
Everything will one day pass
So try and make the moments last
Good or bad, things go away
All of them will end one day.

It’s your choice to take the time
Before you reach your finish line.

Laura
01-18-2008, 11:24 AM
Beautiful Aly ;)

nic bike
01-18-2008, 11:31 AM
Very nice! :D

Tiki
01-18-2008, 07:01 PM
Thats a great poem!:)

Aly
01-18-2008, 07:26 PM
Thanks everyone! I won a $100 gift certificate from a poetry contest for it.

sammy2850
01-18-2008, 07:59 PM
thats excellent aly i enjoyed it and congrats on winning 100 dollars in a contest.

xxxSpikexxx
01-20-2008, 11:43 AM
Good job :D

**TielHeart**
01-20-2008, 03:44 PM
Great poem!

Rosie
01-20-2008, 03:49 PM
It is beautiful, this is when I really wish I could write poems like that. I can write stories, but I always struggle doing poems. :p